i think i'd rather be
hanging upside down from the ceiling
lost in the sound of reverberation
swimming through the static
throwing myself through safety glass
i am under oath to keep on giving
and my mantra is still no art for art's sake
so when i sing —
you know why
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i meant, that you had revealed the truth about the idea of vampires in general: that the whole idea is kind of violent and not sexy. ie, edward cullen is living a lie.
btw i also like all three of the poems you wrote since i've been gone.
1. i hope cliff diving as in, ENJOYMENT OF LIFE, not as in EDWARD CULLEN LEFT ME. MAYBE IF I GO CLIFF DIVING, HE WILL COME BACK TO ME.
2. i am suddenly feeling like PUNCTUATION could improve my life so suddenly my poem is going to have a whole lotta PUNCTUATION and it's going to be wild. or potentially, disastrous.
nm. i'm too much of a pansy to do that. i have no idea how to use punctuation in poetry.
well, the title of my poem is also a line from the chorus of a song by sugarland.
there is something amusing here.
you are SO GOOD.
also i do not know what the heck y'all are talking about on these comment pages and i'm feeling kind of feverish so it's really weird.
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