the meter in the third line is off. i tried to hum it to myself. i offer an edit: "i once was cold but now i burn."...that being said, this is simultaneously sacrilegious and yet not at all.
this is really depressing.also, i have been listening to a lot of blake. maybe it was unwitting because that poem was definitely not inspired by blake.
oh, it's also cool.but depressing.
This is cool. I have previously been completely unable to take anything having to do with this song seriously, but this was cool.
write more poems plz
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the meter in the third line is off. i tried to hum it to myself. i offer an edit: "i once was cold but now i burn."
...that being said, this is simultaneously sacrilegious and yet not at all.
this is really depressing.
also, i have been listening to a lot of blake. maybe it was unwitting because that poem was definitely not inspired by blake.
oh, it's also cool.
but depressing.
This is cool. I have previously been completely unable to take anything having to do with this song seriously, but this was cool.
write more poems plz
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