Tuesday, May 13, 2008

it's chilly

surrounded by her
and the rushing of air;
the sounds try to touch us,
but the stillness is there.

3 comments:

Coweh said...

this works. you're never online, ever. this must be remedied, someday.

Coweh said...

alas! i'm sick and have homework, else i would be on. some other day, perhaps?

Ianthe Wilde said...

i never commented on this! but i love it!
(another four lines, huh?)